Monday, February 1, 2010

The Great Ninja

The great ninja is located in the eastern sky, but you probably can't see it because of its super awesome ninjaness, but if you do see it don't tell anyone where to find him because the great ninja might go off on you with his super awesome ninja powers of awesomeness. like he did the other somewhat great constellations.

the great ninja was graceful as he punched and kicked the soft bodies of his enemies. he was so great that the great god Zeus would pick out his best men to battle the great ninja the great ninja never lost one of these battles for he was intelligent the great ninja would smack these "great" warriors of Zeus until the great ninja could no longer see a face under the large mound of the swollen, bloody, disfigured, discolored thing which was supposed to be their head, then after he pulled each warrior limb from limb he would leave the bloody remnants of the disfigured bodies twisted into impossible positions for the great god Zeus to clean up. Zeus was not happy seeing all the men he sent to capture the great ninja come back bloody, bruised and twisted into impossible positions. So he sent ten men out on a quest to capture and kill the great ninja.

The great ninja heard about what Zeus had done and laughed ya, he actually laughed at the sight of danger. The great ninja got cocky and started drawing graffiti on the walls of the great palace.

Orion had found the great ninja the great god Zeus loved watching Orion torture through his crystal ball (which was very masculine) Orion had him cornered at "ye ole' produce" the great ninja couldn't take it any more so he went to the only place Orion couldn't find him where no one could be able to find him. The sky. Orion was never able to find the great ninja again.

The end

by mariah nelson

7 comments:

  1. I thought the story of the nija was funny but some words were not captilezed or there were peroids missing.

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  2. It was a good story, but there were some grammar issues.

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  3. I agree with everyone, your story was funny and really good, but you have to proof it so you know your spelling everything right.

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  4. This is a good story, but some parts I had to reread just to understand it. Using a character as a ninja was a good idea.

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  5. It was very creative and I really liked it

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  6. I agree with everyone, but next time before you post proof read and add a picture of it. Other then that good job.

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  7. kool story! Zeus nice name you made good conections in the story

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